Friday, March 18, 2011

A word NOT to use in your cover letter and/or resume email

I have seen this a few times over the past few years.  I think it is an East coast phenomenon.  But it grinds my gears to read that word in this context.  It was an email from a new lawyer/job-seeker, with resume attached.  Redacted - it went like this:

"Greetings, I recently graduated from __________ School of Law in 2010 with a 3.09 grade point average.  I am barred in Illinois and currently searching for an attorney position in the Chicago area. Attached is a copy of my resume.  I heard of your lawyer placement and staffing company from a classmate who registered with your firm and I would like to schedule an interview at your earliest convenience.  I have heard wonderful things about your services and look forward to hearing form you."

Whoa - reading the word barred on that type of email is like fingernails on a chalkboard.  I replied to this person's email:  Your resume looks great.  But may I make a small suggestion?   You’ve hit a nerve with me.  I really think you (and some others) are misusing a the word “barred.”  As in, “ I am barred in Illinois…”  I can’t find any known definition of that word which equates to being the same in meaning being “licensed to practice law” in a state.

I totally understand what you mean, but barred mostly means "prevented from" or similar.  In your use – it could even mean “barred from practicing law in Illinois,” which I know is not the case.   I think this is East coast slang – but it’s you letter/email...

2 comments:

  1. This is why it's worth a few bucks to have a professional editor review your stuff before you send it out. I can glance over a one-page letter and one-page resume in a few minutes (maybe $2 of my time) and tell you when something like this sets my teeth on edge.

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  2. hello SacWriterEditor - thanks for commenting.

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